Caveman – #writephoto



Eyes dark, you sulk and brood with a scowl
Expecting all the world to care
About your petty problems
When no one notices
Your empty bottle
Or cares as you
Crawl on back
To your

My response to Sue Vincent’s (Daily Echo) Thursday Photo Prompt – Cave – #writephoto, with her photo, is a nonet.
Once again, my imagination takes over, as I see a drunk’s face, chin on the table, staring into the empty bottle in his outstretched arms.  Okay, so there’s no bottle, but I’m pretty sure the rest of it is there.
Nonet ~ a poem of nine lines and a syllable pattern of 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1, with rhyme optional


Summer Storm

Summer Storm

With sudden dark
Summer’s storms announce their intent
With sudden dark
While the clouds send us livid sparks
Lightning strikes, and when they relent
They leave us, all energy spent,
With sudden dark


Jane Dougherty’s Poetry Challenge #45: Summer storm is to write a rondolet inspired by her photo and using the theme summer storm.
Rondolet ~ 7 lines with 2 rhymes – AbAabbA
                  ~ the refrain has 4 syllables.
                  ~ the other lines have 8 syllables

The Price of Independence

The Price of Independence

The Price Of Independence

storied past
Atlantic birth
home in the Pacific

battle weary
dimensions modest
               by today’s standards
subjected to Bikini

left to limp home
embraced by elements

testament to exploration?

testament to recovery?

testament of war


The Price of Independence_gThe USS Independence was the first of a class of US destroyers converted to light aircraft carrier during the Second World War. After the war, it was used as a target vessel during Operation Crossroads, the July 1, 1946, atomic bomb test within the Bikini Atoll (Marshall Islands, in the Pacific Ocean). Placed one-half mile from The Price of Independence_fthe detonation, the USS Independence was crippled, but survived the blast. Afterward, it was towed to San Francisco for evaluation of damage and radiation levels, as well as “decontamination.” Due to the rising cost of decontamination, USS Independence was towed out to sea and sunk in 2,700 feet of water, 30 miles off the coast of California, in what is now the Greater Farallones National Marine Sanctuary.

The Price of Independence_cThe wreck was re-discovered in March 2015, and exploration and assessment is being conducted this week, via ROV Hercules, a remotely operated underwater vehicle tethered to E/V Nautilus, a research vessel, under the direction of Dr. Robert Ballard. Marine samples will be obtained and evaluated for levels of radiation. Due to the time elapsed since the ship was exposed, and the half-life of the radioactive elements from the blast, radiation levels are expected to be similar to non-exposed marine life.

The Price of Independence_d-eYesterday, I spent some time watching a live stream of the underwater exploration of the USS Independence. Seeing the wreck was breathtaking. Sponges, some of them several meters in length and diameter, covered the hull and equipment, such as anti-aircraft guns. A giant crab hid inside a goiter sponge that was more than a meter across.

The Price of Independence_a-bElevated from the bottom, the sponges filter feed on the nutrients floating in the currents. Unfortunately, it was easy to forget that the wreck’s placement resulted from the testing of a weapon of mass destruction.

The Price of Independence_h

The post-blast photo at the top of the page is from San Francisco Maritime National Historic Park, via The next two underwater photos are screenshots from the livestream at on August 22nd, and the next five are from a highlight video posted on YouTube ( The map is from