Of Tides and Currents

Kayak Moment


distant, yes afar

far from ocean currents

currents running through my mind

minding my random thoughts

thoughtful, and otherwise

wisdom some days present

presently far inland

inland’s only tides

tides of the seasons’ whims


Almost an echo verse, the last line was the first to be written, the rest following from there.
Today is Day Three of NaPoWriMo 2016.
The photo was taken on the Osage River, in Missouri.



7 thoughts on “Of Tides and Currents

    • Thank you.
      Indeed it is. I was looking at my WP Dashboard when I realized I could access comments I’ve made on my own posts. I’ve decided to try writing a found poem using some of them, but the last line here wrote a poem of its own.

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