spring rain – tan renga

spring rain

spring rain:
parting on the beach
a boat and an umbrella
                              
© Ozaki Hosai (1885-1926)

paddle parts spattered water
umbrella drifts off from shore

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 17th, write two lines to follow a given haiku, essentially creating a tanka.

Image of falling rain as provided by Carpe Diem


Carpe Diem Tan Renga

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