spring rain:
parting on the beach
a boat and an umbrella
© Ozaki Hosai (1885-1926)
paddle parts spattered water
umbrella drifts off from shore
This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 17th, write two lines to follow a given haiku, essentially creating a tanka.
Image of falling rain as provided by Carpe Diem
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