mountain stream – tan renga

mountain stream

mountain stream

listening with another
to the music of the mountain stream
here is no other
                                             
(Hando)

silence enhanced, not broken
flowing with tranquility

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 21st, write two lines to follow a given haiku, essentially creating a tanka.

Image of mountain stream as provided by Carpe Diem

Carpe Diem Tan Renga

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