Intersection – tan renga

Intersection

on a windless day
six circles take shape
a pebble skips
                              
(Tournesol)

circles widen, intersect
past and future become one

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 22nd, write two lines to follow a given haiku, essentially creating a tanka.  The hokku (first three lines) is a haiku written by Cheryl Lynn (a.k.a. Tournesol) at Carpe Diem.

Image of water droplet as provided by Carpe Diem

Carpe Diem Tan Renga

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