temple in the sky – tan renga

temple in the sky

temple in the sky
the road opens
a slice of blue sea
                         (Ubugu)

clouds the islands that await
sacred place elevated

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 28th, write two lines to follow a given hokku, essentially creating a tanka.  The original haiku is by Ubugu (pen name of Robert Gibson).

Image source: wallpaperwa.com

 

Carpe Diem Tan Renga

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