Reveal

Reveal

do not doubt it,
the bay has its spring too,
the flowers of the tide
                                   © Basho (1644-1694)

with hidden treasures revealed
gift of receding water

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 31st, write two lines to follow a given hokku, essentially creating a tanka.

Image source: huffingtonpost.com

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