a flash of lightning – tan renga

a flash of lightning

a flash of lightning-
passing through the darkness
a night heron’s scream
© Basho (1644-1694)

clap of thunder in the night
music of rainfall on leaves

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #103, write two lines to follow a given hokku, essentially creating a tanka.
Image source: rpseeds.co.uk

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Chain

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