sea cliffs

Sea_Cliffs

coming to sea cliffs
the off-shore breeze raises
a flower fragrance
                         © Jane Reichhold

sea hawk soars just out of reach
the edge of a great expanse

Using the photo from the challenge, this is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #105, write two lines to follow a given hokku, essentially creating a tanka.

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