snow melting

snow melting

snow melting–
where ducks are nesting
soft moonlight
                              © Issa

thin layer of ice melting
diving soon for tasty shoots

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #106, write two lines to follow a given hokku, essentially creating a tanka.  Original haiku written by Kobayashi Issa (1763-1828)

Image source: rockymountaindayhikes.com

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