the open window

the open window

the open window
screened with a web
leaf shadows
                         © Jane Reichhold

morning dew in pearls on web
screen glistens as shadows shift

This is my response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #108, write two lines to follow a given hokku, essentially creating a tanka.  The alliteration is a happy coincidence.  Original haiku written by Jane Reichhold.

Image source: wallpaperup.com

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