silence I can touch

silence-i-can-touch

silence I can touch
breeze caressing pink blossoms
wisteria speaks

The challenge for Carpe Diem Revise That Haiku #7 is to “revise” a haiku by Kiyoshi.
Here’s the original:

only silence
the summer breeze caresses
wisteria blossom

Image source: 123hdwallpapers.com

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