The hands crawl around the dial, as time runs out
The years having crept up on me in my final days
In the little time I have left, I wonder at all that has passed
Will I be remembered, as I remember those I have known
Or will memories of me fade, now, as I fade away
Some things are meant to be forgotten, perhaps never really known
Jane Dougherty has introduced me to the cleave poem, in her Poetry Challenge #24. It’s an interesting challenge to write, as the mind needs to be able to follow three lines of thought while composing the lines.
Cleave poem ~ a poem without rhyme, meter or set length. Dividing the poem into left and right sides reveals two separate poems, in addition to the original.
There is a hint of Shakespeare in there. Love it!
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Thank you.
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Kim’s right. Very melancholy, and full of a quiet wisdom, but I think you’re jumping the gun, Ken. You shouldn’t be writing this kind of poem for decades yet.
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Thanks… on both counts!
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What a fascinating concept: the cleave poem. Amazing, sometimes, the things that open my eyes if I only bother to look.
Somehow, I also think, wakening to a cup of tea, that you could tell me things about the sound of water and a paddle. Oar am eye ownly imagining things a gain?
Good morning K. I welcome us to the month of poetry.
Are there tides on your Missouri river?
Hmmm.
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Tides of the seasons’ whims
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It’s the change of seasons…really pulls at the emotions of life’s transformations. Caught in these words. (K)
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Longer days erasing a monochromatic haze could be the answer.
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I agree with Kim and Jane.
I especially like the last line, and how the 2 lines of thought meet there.
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Thank you.
I think Jane’s method of repeated efforts might be the best way to get used to writing this form.
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Beautiful first and second poems, and flawlessly seamless third. I agree – I love the last line the most.
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Merci!
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De rien!
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I’ve been trying to come up with something in this form, so far not much has happened. You, however have nailed it. Love it!
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Thank you!
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Nice poem, but isn’t it a little early?
I am 86 and don’t feel ready, chronologically or poetically, to write such a poem.
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You’ll never be ready, Margaret, because you live each day to the fullest. And, you are far from forgettable.
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