forgotten
when you cast
your dark shadow on
the time we had
remember
you obscure the light
we saw in each other
shed your darkness
embrace the light
This is my response to Sue Vincent’s (Daily Echo) Thursday Photo Prompt – Secrets #writephoto, with her photo.
As beautiful as always, Ken, though this one has raw edges.
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Thank you, Sue. Maybe it was the prompt word, but the photo has a feeling of something left unsaid, to me.
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The room had its memories… and the building is old enough to have forgottenthem. Perhaps that is sadness enough.
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Thank you.
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Lovely response to the photo. I agree with Sue.
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Thank you. Maybe it’s the abandoned look of the photo, and “Secret,” but my mind went to the idea of raw emotions.
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Yes, I can see that. (I mean from the photo). 🙂
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Words of powerful wisdom…beautifully done..
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Thank you, Michael. Some people refuse to move forward, focusing on what went wrong, and that was one of the thoughts that occurred to me from this photo.
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Not only do I find this lovely, it is very powerful. I love it.
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Thank you.
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Evocative!
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